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Post by storm on May 23, 2006 19:10:02 GMT -5
Yes, I write poems, depressing poems that make people cry, but it's how I feel, and I'm getting help, but I feel hopeless either way. -shrugs- Enjoy them, hate them, delete them from the site, I don't care, they are my way of helping myself.
Hollow and alone My heart was my home Until you broke it without a care. All eyes on me, a cold heartless stare. What do you want out of me? Some souless ragdoll to follow commands. Sorry shitface, not in my plans. You all held my heart in your hands and shattered it without a thought. You don't know there was a death you wrought. A cold blade to my wrist, me holding death's soft kiss, and the eyes of someone who had broken my trust is the least of why this girl died. The reason she commited suicide.
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Scarfan
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The truth is I'm not Juliet Douglas. Who am I? Well, that's the real Secret.
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Post by Scarfan on May 24, 2006 15:50:42 GMT -5
That was really dark, but it was good. I personally love the emotion put into the poem, but I feel terrible that you have to feel like that. Good luck on your long road to recovery.
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Post by storm on May 24, 2006 16:39:36 GMT -5
Thanks, I always put honest emotion into my poem, otherwise it feels like a waste of lead. I do want to get better, but it's hard, I fall back on myself, but I'm trying, and I am doing better.
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Post by Ake-chan on May 25, 2006 7:57:57 GMT -5
I really liked that It was good. Putting emotion into a poem is a good thing to do. I do that...when I write my own poems or songs. I hope that everything is ok with you soon...Good Luck in your future.
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Post by Scarfan on May 27, 2006 19:14:14 GMT -5
Thanks, I always put honest emotion into my poem, otherwise it feels like a waste of lead. I do want to get better, but it's hard, I fall back on myself, but I'm trying, and I am doing better. Great.^_^ Good luck.^_^ With the recovery, I mean.
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