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The truth is I'm not Juliet Douglas. Who am I? Well, that's the real Secret.

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Our Sin Feb 28, 2006 15:29:10 GMT -5

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Post by Scarfan on Feb 28, 2006 15:29:10 GMT -5

This is something I threw together while I was bored in study hall. It only took about 15 minutes to make, so I'm not sure how it turned out. Anyway, this is a poem in Ed's perspective.

Disclaimer: I do not own Fullmetal Alchemist, Edward or Alphonse Elric. They belong to their respective creators. (Boy, I think this is obvious, though.)

Our Sin

~It felt to much for us to take,
feeling like our hearts would break
the day our mother left this world
and we knew we would see her no more.

We tried what was forbidden.
We just wanted our mother living.
But, now I know that we were wrong.
You can't bring back what's gone.

I lost my arm and you your body.
Al, I just want to say I'm sorry.
We tried to bring back our mother,
but instead created a monster.
I'm sorry, Mom, I never ment for
things to go so wrong.

Now I know what I should have then.
Playing God should not be done.
This burden we carry is our punishment
for our sin we can never bury.~

Like I said, it was really short...

Last Edit: Feb 28, 2006 20:55:52 GMT -5 by Scarfan

"I'm not all there all the time you know. Some people, some people, some people call it insane. Yeah, they call it insane." System of a Down, Sugar

I love System of a Down, Harry Potter, Lord of the Flies, and Fullmetal Alchemist!^_^ (Yes, I AM obsessed.)>_>

Characters I RP: Maes Hughes, Lust, Sloth and Scar.
In other RPs I play: Sirius Black(HP), Faust VIII (SK) and Simon (LOTF)

Ake-chan Elite Otaku Teh Pwnsome Kaoru Hitachiin and Tamaki Suoh Fangirl =D The Ouran Fangirl =D Posts: 869	Our Sin Mar 1, 2006 8:55:45 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Ake-chan on Mar 1, 2006 8:55:45 GMT -5 I really liked that and you have yet to give me your autograph ^_^!!! Great job!! ^_^!!!!
	Ake-chan ish a HUGE Ouran fan!

Scarfan New Member Sloth The truth is I'm not Juliet Douglas. Who am I? Well, that's the real Secret. Posts: 806	Our Sin Mar 1, 2006 17:59:48 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Scarfan on Mar 1, 2006 17:59:48 GMT -5 Thabk you very much. Woops, I did, didn't I? (Blushes.) Sorry. Oh, yeah. You have it on two of the Yu Gi Oh cards I gave you.
	"I'm not all there all the time you know. Some people, some people, some people call it insane. Yeah, they call it insane." System of a Down, Sugar I love System of a Down, Harry Potter, Lord of the Flies, and Fullmetal Alchemist!^_^ (Yes, I AM obsessed.)>_> Characters I RP: Maes Hughes, Lust, Sloth and Scar. In other RPs I play: Sirius Black(HP), Faust VIII (SK) and Simon (LOTF)

Ake-chan Elite Otaku Teh Pwnsome Kaoru Hitachiin and Tamaki Suoh Fangirl =D The Ouran Fangirl =D Posts: 869	Our Sin Mar 1, 2006 18:18:51 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Ake-chan on Mar 1, 2006 18:18:51 GMT -5 Thats right I do and they are in my main deck ^_^!!!! ^_^!!! I just wantedto say great job yet again!!! ^_^!!!
	Ake-chan ish a HUGE Ouran fan!

Scarfan New Member Sloth The truth is I'm not Juliet Douglas. Who am I? Well, that's the real Secret. Posts: 806	Our Sin Mar 1, 2006 21:50:57 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Scarfan on Mar 1, 2006 21:50:57 GMT -5 Seriously, thanks.^_^ You sure it was O.K.? That only took me a few minutes... probably not very well thought out...
	"I'm not all there all the time you know. Some people, some people, some people call it insane. Yeah, they call it insane." System of a Down, Sugar I love System of a Down, Harry Potter, Lord of the Flies, and Fullmetal Alchemist!^_^ (Yes, I AM obsessed.)>_> Characters I RP: Maes Hughes, Lust, Sloth and Scar. In other RPs I play: Sirius Black(HP), Faust VIII (SK) and Simon (LOTF)

Ake-chan Elite Otaku Teh Pwnsome Kaoru Hitachiin and Tamaki Suoh Fangirl =D The Ouran Fangirl =D Posts: 869	Our Sin Mar 3, 2006 11:02:43 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Ake-chan on Mar 3, 2006 11:02:43 GMT -5 I really did like it!! ^_^!!
	Ake-chan ish a HUGE Ouran fan!

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