Mrs Jean Havoc
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Post by Mrs Jean Havoc on Feb 23, 2006 19:12:37 GMT -5
~Ch.1: The meeting~
As a little girl, Elicia knew about her father. Now,a young 16 year old girl, she is devoted to being just like her father. "Hey!! Roy!!" Screamed Elicia. "ROY!! Its been so long!!" she said. Roy looked at her oddly. "Excuse me, but may I ask who you are?" Roy said. Elicia just smiled and said "Im Elicia Hughes!!" Roy gave her a puzzled look like he didnt know her. But then that face turned into a smile. "Its been so long. You have your fathers smile. Why are you here?" he asked. Elicias smiled turned into a frown. "I want to take on daddys old job. I want to be in the military. I want to be a lieutenant.. just like him" she said.
Roy loked at Elicia and smiled "Your father was amazing but... you do realize how dangerous it is in the military, dont you?" Roy asked. Suddenly, Riza came up "Oh Roy. please. Aerins in the military and you never told him it was dangerous in here," she told him. Roy glared at Riza "Im aware of that. But, shes different. She might get killed like Maes." Hearing this, Elicia burst into tears "YOU KNOW!!! I COULD BE JUST LIKE MY FATHER AND NOT GET KILLED!!! EVER THINK OF THAT!?" she said and ran off.
As Elicia ran, she ended up running into a young boy about her age with black hair and a charming smile. "Hello. Why are you running? Are you a new recruit?" the boy asked. Elicia stood straight up and saluted "No Im not. Im the daughter of Maes Hughes. My names Elicia." she said. The boy laughed and smiled "Oh. Well then, hello Elicia. Im aerin Mustang. Its a pleasure to meet you" he said as he took her had and kissed it. Elicia blushed.
Roy ran over to them. He looked at Elicia "Dang.. your as fast as your father was. Ok then. since your the daughter of a former friend, I welcome you to the military" he said. Elicia smiled and saluted to Roy. "Ok then. Where do I begin?" she asked. Roy smiled "Do you use alchemy?" he asked. Elicia shook her head up and down. She grabbed a necklace from her pocket and slipped it on. Using her breathe and alchemy, she blew ice from the neklace "I use ice alchemy" she replied with a smile. "Ok then. Heres your uniform. You start in the morning" Roy replied and walked away.
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Post by Ake-chan on Feb 24, 2006 13:58:16 GMT -5
Oh that was cool!!! ^_^!!!!
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Mrs Jean Havoc
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Post by Mrs Jean Havoc on Feb 24, 2006 15:23:49 GMT -5
~Chapter 2: The Mission~
Elicia woke up the next morning "MY FIRST MISSION TODAY!!" she announced as she ran out of her room into the bathroom. She quickly got changed and ran over to Fuhrer Roy Mustang. "Ok. Im ready for my 1st mission!!" she said happily. Roy looked around furiously, trying to think of what to do. "Ok. Your first mission is to.... MAKE ME A SANDWICH!!! Mayo, tomatoes, and ham please," He told her. Elicia gave him a smile "YES SIR!" she said as she ran out of the room into the kichen.
She ran into the kitchen and looked for the bread. She quickly cut some tomatoes and made Roy a sandwich. "Here you go, fuhrer," she said with a smile. Roy smiled back "Well done, Major Elicia Hughes. Your next mission is to get me a drink," he told her. Elicia ran out and ran back in with a glass of milk "Here you go sir!!" she said. "Sir.. these missions are TOO simple. I want a more difficult mission. If you could," Elicia told him. Roy suddenly got a frightened look on his face "Your break is now, Major," he said.
Elicia frowned and walked out of the room. "Damn.. I try to impress the furher and he gives me all these goddamned easy missions," she said as she frowned. She suddenly began to cry "If dad was here.. he'd give me better jobs than this. He'd ACTUALLY trust me more!!" she screamed as she cried. Aerin heard her crying and ran over by her side. "Elicia... are you ok?" he asked. Elicia didnt respond. She just kept on crying. Aerin pulled her close to him and hugged her tightly "Its ok. My father just wants you to be safe," he said. Elicia looked up at him. She blushed and quickly kissed his cheek "Hes afraid I might be like papa... I might get killed.. but I wont.. I have his instincts.. his bravery... his smile. In every way, except the fact Im a girl, Im like him," she told him.
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Scarfan
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Post by Scarfan on Feb 28, 2006 22:00:08 GMT -5
I like the story.^_^ It's cute.^_^ (Sorry it took me a while to read it, play practice and fiddling around with other stuff's the cause of that.)
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Post by Ake-chan on Mar 1, 2006 9:09:07 GMT -5
I liked the 2nd chapter the last part: "Hes afraid I might be like papa... I might get killed.. but I wont.. I have his instincts.. his bravery... his smile. In every way, except the fact Im a girl, Im like him," she told him. I really loved that part!!! ^_^!!! Great job!! ^_^!! Keep it up!!! ^_^!!!
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Mrs Jean Havoc
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Post by Mrs Jean Havoc on Mar 2, 2006 17:15:04 GMT -5
(theres a bit more for ch. 2. The 1st parts the last part of the last par. Thens theres the next par.)
Aerin looked at Elicia and gave her a smile "I know, Elicia. From what dad told me about Maes, you are quite a bit like him," he said.
Aerin pulled Elicia closer to him and put his lips near hers. Elicia pulled back "WHAT ARE YOU DOING!?" Elicia screamed. Aerin frowned "Im sorry." Elicia looked at him and smiled. She quickly kissed him. "Its ok." she said. Aerin smiled. "Well, Elicia. I was wondering.. how would you like to go on a date with me?" He asked. Elicia got a shocked face and smiled "I'd love to Aerin!!" she said excitedly. Elicia ran into Central and ran to her room, jumping with excitement. Roy walked over to her. "Why so excited?" he asked. Elicia just smiled and walked away to her room to get some sleep before her big day.
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Post by Ake-chan on Mar 3, 2006 14:09:02 GMT -5
OH THAT WAS SO CUTE!!!! ^_^!!! *squeees* AWWWW!!!! AREIN AND ELICA!!! ^_^!!!!
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Post by Mrs Jean Havoc on Mar 10, 2006 17:02:50 GMT -5
~Ch. 3: The date~
Elicia woke up bright and early, excited to go on her date. "YESS!!! I cant wait!! I hope he takes me somewhere nice," He thought to herself. As she walked down the hall, she saw Riza. "Oh hello Riza," she said with a smile. Riza looked at her and smiled "Aerin told me you guys are going on a date. Hey, Roy doesnt want you out but I'll make sure he doesnt find out." Elicia smiled "Thank you," she said as she saluted and walked away.
She met Aerin outside at the car. She hopped in and they drove away. The spot that Aerin took her to was a beautiful lake. He stopped the car and opened the door. " Oh wow. What a gentlemen," Elicia said with a smile. Aerin blushed and also smiled. He layed a blanket down on the ground and sat down. Elicia sat down with him. " Elicia.. you are so beautiful..." Aerin started to say, but suddenly stopped. Elicia blushed. She looked into Aerins eyes and got closer to him. Her heart started pounding faster and faster the closer she got to him.
Aerin finally grabbed her and kissed her lips. "UGH!!! Things like this make me sick! Lets break it up!" said a mysterious voice. Elicia pulled away from Aerin and looked up. A mysterious person with green hair that resembled a palm tree jumped down. "Hello there. Im Envy." The person said as he gave them an evil glare.
Aerin walked over in front of Elicia protectively. "Why are you here?" he asked angrily. Envy smirked and pushed Aerin away. He touched Elicias face, then walked away. "I want to kill the girl!!" he screamed. Elicia got a shocked face. She fainted. "ELICIA!!" yelled Aerin. Envy jumped into a tree and quickly left. Aerin picked up Elicia and ran to the hospital.
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Mrs Jean Havoc
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Post by Mrs Jean Havoc on Mar 10, 2006 17:03:15 GMT -5
~Ch. 4: The hospital~
Aerin made it to the hospital where he gave Elicia to a nurse. The nurse quickly took her to a room where she did a check up on Elicia. She discovered a huge gash in Elicias side and due to blood loss, that was the reason she fainted. "Will elli be alright?" Aerin asked with a concerned look. The nurse looked down at the wound, then looked up at Aerin. "She lost an aweful lot of blood so, were not sure. We assure you, we will call you tomorrow when she awakes," She said to Aerin. Aerin frowned and walked out of the hospital, to his car, and drove off to central.
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Post by Scarfan on Mar 14, 2006 20:48:02 GMT -5
I still love this story.^_^ But, I want to know something that wasn't exsplained.... How did Elicia get her gash? Or is that something to be later exsplained.
Lust- (HUgs May.) So glad I'm not the bad guy this time.^________^
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Post by Ake-chan on Mar 15, 2006 10:55:36 GMT -5
THIS IS SO GOOD!!! With what Heather said how did that gash happen? Anyway, I love the story so far keep up the great work!! ^_^!! Speaking of I think I should type up my 2nd chapter to my fic. *runs off to try to get her second chapter up*
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Mrs Jean Havoc
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Post by Mrs Jean Havoc on Mar 17, 2006 20:32:25 GMT -5
Riza looked out the window at central. She ran out to see how there date was. "Hmm... seems you left Elicia behind. Usually its the basket you leave behind, not the girlfriend," Riza said with a laugh. Aerin gave her a sad look. Riza looked at him "Aerin.. what happened?" Aerin just gave her a look and said "At the picnic, Elicia was attacked by a strange talking palm tree named Envy. She fainted. I took her to the hospital." Riza gave him a shocked look, grabbed his arm, and rushed off to the hospital. "WE'VE GOTTA GET THERE BEFORE THE OTHER HOMUNCULUS DO!!" she screamed.
Elicia woke up to see three faces. One was familiar. It was the palm tree she saw at the park. The other two were unknown. One was the face of a young boy with a metal arm and long, black hair. The other was a face of a very scary bald person. ".... who are you?..." she asked in pain. Envy looked at her and rubbed her head. "Dont move. your hurt," The young boy told her. The palm tree ran over and pushed the young boy away. "IM ENVY!! That twerp theres Wrath. Thats Gluttony!" He said with a smirk. Elicia gave him a confused look. "Ugh! Nevermind. Just.... stay there," He told her. Elicia fainted with confusion.
Riza slammed the door opened and looked at Envy. "FREEZE!! DONT GO NEAR THE GIRL!!!" she yelled. Envy, Wrath, and Gluttony didnt listen. They just quickly ran off. Aerin looked down at Elicia. Suddenly, Elicia got back up. "Ugh...... stupid..Envy....huh?...oh..hi...Aerin.." she said in pain. Riza smiled. "Glad your ok Elicia. You gonna be ok?" she asked. Elicia looked at her and shook her head up and down. "No.. leave her for a while. When Edward was here, he bleed pretty bad," A voice from behind them said. Riza looked back and saw it was Roy. "uh oh...." aerin and Elicia both said. Roy laughed. "Enjoy your dae you two?" Aerin and Elicia laughed and shook there head up and down.
Three days later, Roy and Aerin went back to the hospital to get Elicia. Elicia stood up and ran into Aerins arms. "IM BETTER!!" She screamed with joy. Aerin laughed and carried her out to the car. before going back to central, they stopped out for lunch to pay back Elicia for her horrid date when she got hurt. "We'd like a salad please," All three of them said, laughing. After lunch, they headed back to Central. Elicia walked off to her room, hoping the next day will be better.
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Post by Ake-chan on Mar 23, 2006 8:48:27 GMT -5
YIPPY!!! ^_^!!! I love that keep up the good work!! ^_^!!! ARGGG!!! I lost the game again, you kno what I'm talking about Trisha ^_^!!! I gotta get it out of my mind!!! Anyway keep up the good work on your story I love it!! ^_^!!! AreinXElicia ^_^!!!!
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Post by Tel-Jilad Squirrel on Mar 24, 2006 18:29:24 GMT -5
ACK!!!! I LOST!!!! THANKS A LOT MOTO-SAN!!! Nice story! I'm intrigued by it. And I think I know how Elicia got that gash....
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Post by Mrs Jean Havoc on Apr 25, 2006 16:04:41 GMT -5
Ch. 5. The black lair (The homunculus's new spot)
Envy walked in. "Damn.. we almost got her too! Were going to have to try another day though." He leaned back, stretching his arms. The strange bald guy, otherwise known as Gluttony, gave a sad face. "Im hungry!!!" he yelled. he young boy, otherwise known as Wrath, ran over. "I GOT IT THIS TIME!!" He yelled, throwing Gluttony 5 steaks which he devoured quickly. Wrath slightly frowned. "It was usually mommy who fed him though...after Lust died anyways.." he said. Envy looked over at Wrath. "AH!!! SHUT UP!! SHE WASNT YOUR MOMMY ANYWAYS, YOU BABY!!! We have more important things anyways. Like getting rid of that girl!!" He yelled. Wrath just frowned. "SHE WAS TOO MY MOMMY AND IM GONNA FIND A WAY TO BRING HER BACK!!!" He yelled. Suddenly, he took off running into a nearby room, crying.
A handsome young man walked in. He had shoulder length hair, beautiful ice blue eyes that shone in the light, wore a black hat on his head, and had black jeans with a white undershirt and blue jacket. Envy looked back. "Ah, hey Greed." He said. Greed just looked at him. "Cut the crap. What did you do the frickin brat this time? You know not to mention his mother till we bring her back. Which will be as soon as we get her remains from a certain girl," he said with an evil smile. Envy leaned back in his chair and looked back at Greed. "Well, Im sorry but the bastard was bugging me." He swung the chair to face Greed and pounded on the table beside him. "Besides... WE HAVE NO WAY TO BRING HER BACK!!! THAT GIRL HID THE REMAINS IN HER GODDAMN SAFE!!! WE HAVE NO-". Greed put his hand over Envys mouth. "patient, dumbass. Your talking to the greediest guy you ever met. I can make those remains mine and only mine. Also, make Sloth mine and only mine too." Envy gave him a disguisted look when he heard him say Sloth was his and only his.
Gluttony looked over. "Bring back my Lust, too?" he asked, sticking his finger in his mouth. Greed looked over at him. "Yes. Lust too." he said with a smirk. "The 4 deadly sins will soon be the 7 deadly sins ONCE AGAIN!!" He said with an evil laugh. Envy took Greeds hand off his mouth. "Ok. I got it! Sheesh. If you say it loud enough the brats gonna hear!" he yelled, putting his hand over Greeds mouth. Greed pulled Envys hand off his mouth. "Yeah. I guess your right for once," he said. Envy smirked. "and how do you spell your name, Greed?" he asked. A stressed mark showed up on Greeds head "shut up. Now. I was little and you were to. Now, we need to GET THAT GIRL!!"
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